Dr. Jamie Bondage

Serena: I gasped and sighed, nodding. "Just a little." I said, a smile playing at my lips. "How are you?" I asked, making a futile attempt to wipe my tears ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! What do you enjoy writing? I'm Jamie. If you have any questions, feel free to pm me! Jamie

This was good. It was extremely vague and short. I would suggest expanding on your ideas. What are you feeling? What are you trying to get across to the reader? ...

This was good. It was extremely vague and short. I would suggest expanding on your ideas. What are you feeling? What are you trying to get across to the reader? ...

Freedom of speech is wonderful. We can say what we want. Yes, we still have to be careful. But if we don't like something, we have the right to say ...

**Whoa. since when did my character come back in?! Oh well.** Serena: As soon as I saw my friends had the situation under control, I left again. I didn't want ...

Wow. This was really...deep. The only mistake I saw was that in the second to last stanza you put "you" instead of "your." It seemed also just a tad repetitive, ...

Hwy! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here! XD what do you write? what do you enjoy reading? If you have any questions, feel free to pm me! ...

This seems sort of repetitives. I liked it, but it seems way too repetitive. My suggestion would be to add more verses. another thing is that the second verse doesn't ...

Brian: I paled as the docter on the line started talking to me. I ran back into the hospital, passing Marc. "Your sister...blood...danger!" I flew past him, up the stairs ...

This was really good! It's so sweet! I really like it! I love the message. I didn't really see any gramatical problems or phrasing. I really liked it. XD I ...

Serena: I sighed and felt like crying. It just wasn't fair! I wanted my guy too. I sighed. I wanted to be alone...but I didn't know how. "I need to ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! I'm sure youzll like it. It's always nice to have friends you know on the site. several of my friends joined. There are many people who ...

Brian: she hated me. that was just great. I was such an idiot. I sighed. and I had made her cry! Way to go. "I didnzt mean to. it just ...

Brian: I sighed. "I...I accidently told him...that you were raped. He made me mad because he said you had no excuse for being on drugs and running over your brother, ...